Sunday, October 30, 2005

Obtaining Delight This Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

A winter
without snow
to transform
brutal asphalt
...
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Joy Vanderhelm 20 November 2005

Brilliant, descrptive and making me wish it was snowing! Well done.

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because I find it so difficult to be 'flowery' - I enjoyed this poem. This poem makes a California sun bunny...wish she was there in that 'optic' revelation.

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