Saturday, January 2, 2010

Obstacles Comments

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Life throws obstacles at everyone
Not mattering if its death, divorce or arguments
There is always a situation that makes you stop and think
At that point many people attempt to change who they are
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Sarah Marie 06 March 2010

I absolutley love this poem. You are a great writer and your poems are amazing. Great work!

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Zack Burton 06 March 2010

Very true, very frank, and very generic. Good work, but I like I REMEMBER better.

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Adam Reed 06 March 2010

not bad senorita. pretty insightful too ju should take up psychology :)

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Ryan Thompson 11 January 2010

this is very true and it made me think about my friend and me

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J.M. Berger 11 January 2010

I like this a lot and this is such a good mindset to have

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That poem is so true. You are really smart in being able to speak with such honesty and thoughtfullness. My favorite line is 'At this point I believe friends are the necessary help and support'. Thanks for being my friend.

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