Sunday, November 26, 2017

Obsession With Cheese Comments

Rating: 5.0

There were once two bees
their only wish to eat cheese
Flying from frlowers to trees
looking for that magic chesse
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Marina Zerdali
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Unnikrishnan E S 07 November 2021

Another piece of fictional poetry. Loved the style of storytelling. Great. Keep it up.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 23 February 2018

That s awesome imagination. Brilliant scripting. Thanks for sharing

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Garima 11 December 2017

What a great poetry

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Rajnish Manga 11 December 2017

Quite an interesting poem with a gripping narrative. It's sweet like a nursery rhyme. Thank you, Marina.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

The bees with a smart plan to analyze found a way to steel. For joy and honey they started working. You observed and expressed well in brilliant poem...10

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