Wednesday, June 6, 2018

Obsession Comments

Rating: 5.0

Magnificent obsession,
Poetic transgression,
Endless procession
That dissipates my tears
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Sandra Feldman
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Bill Cantrell 07 June 2018

Now this is just a perfect poem in every sense of the word

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 June 2018

Sandra, such an awesome piece....10++++

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Susan Williams 06 June 2018

Talk about flowing rhymes to create a poem that is smooth as silk! ! ! I really like this rhyme scheme in this poem- -we could all learn from you how to weave a magic spell over readers! Excellent.10 million kudos! .

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Kelly Kurt 06 June 2018

Years have their advantages. Enjoy them!

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Robert Murray Smith 06 June 2018

Sandra, to have poetry so close we never have to shut the gates.+++10 Robert

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