Thursday, March 25, 2010

Obsession Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are my growing pain,
My pleasure,
Seeping into my bones,
As if you were an arrogant
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Nathaniel Graves
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Raymond Wright 09 April 2010

I have to agree with Samantha, this is really great. Interesting structure and great imagery. Well done! ~R

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thats really good. a lot of meaning. keep it up.

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