Obsess Comments

I have noticed that you: a) Like rhyming couplets b) Go to great lengths to make rhyming couplets, even if it means forcing them c) Are obsessed with the concept of mortality, since you'ved mentioned it in every poem I've read so far. I think you've got talent, especially to be able to come up with so many rhymes. Don't limit yourself. I think it would do you a lot of good to try something new; a new theme, a new style of writing. Give it a try.