Tuesday, August 29, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

He'd been thinking about a good line
as the evening began to decline.
But she smiled with a nod
and it doesn't seem odd
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 29 August 2006

Yes, this needs a part two. For part one, this is, as our Tara says, intriguing as well as gently humorous. Good to see you posting again, Herbs. Hope you are well. Love, Gina.

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And I guess we have to wait for the next instalment....? An intriguing, finely composed limerick H. t x

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