Tuesday, August 29, 2006

Observed - Part Iii Comments

Rating: 5.0

Well, the fellow was known as O'Hara.
And the beauty was loved as Sweet Tara.
Once he barged in the room
like a grouch of a groom
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Linda Ori 29 August 2006

Sweet write! I like the rhythm and flow of this one - just a great, enjoyable read! Linda

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Gina Onyemaechi 29 August 2006

Another cute and saucy giggle! Well, you've lost nothing of your old form I see! Thanks for the laugh, Herbs.

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The lady of the house was his name, and he cosmetic-d a lady so vain? I hope that in bed he wasn't blown off instead being gone with the wind, or insane..... Laughing at instalment III, you talented poet-to-order, you! Standing ovation indeed.... t x

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