Tuesday, August 29, 2006

Observed - Part Ii Comments

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He had booked them the hot air balloon,
as the blossoms of love sang a tune.
But they missed it, though just
and his love turned to frust,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 29 August 2006

I'm laughing out loud, Herbs! But honestly, of all the things to happen to the poor woman, flying mice...! Ya ha ha! See you at part 3!

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Part II as requested so speedily, we now must await for Part III; to know, did she say yes? and, well, did she undress? or is that between he, she and thee? Fab H! An enchanting, comical, imaginative and of course masterfully penned second instalment..... t x

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