Friday, July 4, 2014

Observations Of Imagination Comments

Rating: 4.5

Watching clouds an' dreaming,
A favourite pastime of toddlers;
Till youth compels cloud-high leaping.
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Khairul Ahsan 20 August 2018

'Ensnaring wit and luring ambition Across the prison of global existence; As, hectic cynics eclipse leisur'd imagination.' - Well said! Loved these lines.

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* Sunprincess * 17 September 2014

.......in my imagination this is a beautiful painting...

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Mohammad Jahoorul Islam 29 August 2014

Alas! Those moments speed past Across the seamless worldly chores; As, grownups shy such childish repast.....sometimes we become child too! !

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Valsa George 09 July 2014

Riot of bright hues slashed Across the setting summer canopy As, brilliance of Holi displayed. A poem abounding in beautiful analogies..... highly imaginative and greatly original! Among the many, I mostly enjoyed the one above!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 July 2014

Wow a sublime poem on what u can imagine clouds shapes. Realistic but imaginative. I love watchin clouds and oh the tings i see in them.

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