Observations Of A Native Comments

Painstakingly true! Word for word in the purest form. I'd love to see you come back and revise another Version of this piece. Like from another point of view. Picture perfect! Very precise! KW

Dear Jeremy, you have a unique way of writing which I really find captivating. I await more poetic surprises from you and thank you again for this beautiful poem!

I think this captivates succinctly the mundane and unfulfilling life many are now living in the modern industrial era. The dull and repetitive routine that takes its toll on the human spirit.