Sunday, August 30, 2009

Observation Comments

Rating: 5.0

A candle burning is only wax,
Melting down to what it was
Before it entered a candle mold
Where do drips of substance go?
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Romeo Della Valle
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(De Va) 28 October 2011

great....I have been there, you know, where things go that are not here...smiles n blessings

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Amrit Rathi 08 June 2010

A great truth so subtly told! .....must be realer than here...Where things go that disappear...SIMPLY A GREAT POEM. I loved it10+ no doubt. Hope you would enjoy my poem MEDITATION...

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