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Finding the Source
wall of gold reformed
my own projection cornered
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Excellent bunch of Senryu, nicely put together...10++ Congrats for the poem of the day, a deserving poem, indeed.
Aloha Mohammed... Cheers My Brother... Thank you for the kudos... My co-author would be pleased to have you visit her too... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
Aloha Mohammed... Cheers My Brother... Thank you for the kudos... My co-author would be pleased to have you visit her too... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
Challenge each lesson and, live with the works of the truth! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Aloha Edward... Nice to have you step-in... I thank you for having a read, and for these comments... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
Aloha Edward... Nice to have you step-in... I thank you for having a read, and for these comments... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
Nice to see your poem at the Poem of the day Michael, Congratulations
Aloha Soul Watcher... Cheers... and my humble thanks for having a lookin and a read... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
Aloha Kelly... I thank you my brother... that you recognized this collection as one... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
This is perfect! Well done my friend. :) You've really captures my original piece and have spun it into a beautiful poem.
Aloha Jenn... Perfect this is... discovering that you are here also? It is a small world after all... This post is a series of Senryu, seven separate works, composed from the works that you have put to words and along with a few of my thoughts about so much more than US... came to be this... IAM pleased that you have visited here and have taken to this way of sharing our combined thoughts and works... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
Astonishing, Michael.Some thing like that I tried in my ''My own walls too''. A thoughtfull, sensitive inside dive.
Aloha Dimitrios... I thank you kind Sir... for having a look, read, and making these most positive comments... IAM working on several projects in the kitchen of words at the same time just now... This little page of thoughts was one that came out very well. And IAM fortunate to have experienced the worth of Jenn, before beginning to develop the thoughts that came through and resulted in this write... And I have visited your wall... it is just now being moved to the side burner... so I can watch it simmer... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
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Congrats on poem, and getting poem of the day, well done!
Aloha Brian... Thank you for having a look see and a read... and please do call on Jenn... She wrote a fine post to incite this write... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
Aloha Brian... Thank you for having a look see and a read... and please do call on Jenn... She wrote a fine post to incite this write... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two