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It’s the earthy echo
It’s the calm of the air
It’s the drummer’s tempo
It’s the charm of the snare
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So time (turning of the wheel) has pushed you in love, with the obscurity of life. Wonderful! The silence of the writer is obscure. Very good choice of vocabulary. Cheers!
A marvelous homage to nature! You're a star and your powerful poem has brought peace and serenity to my soul.
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7/19/2025 12:19:47 PM # 1.0.0
a nice write.ya true obscure are the ways of nature.