Sunday, May 4, 2008

Oblivion Comments

Rating: 4.3

Eyes wide shut
open -
for all to see!
darkness
...
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Mark Sebert
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Kesav Easwaran 06 May 2008

eyes wide shut...darkness is open for all to see! wonderful lines, mark!

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Nomi Mas 05 May 2008

it's got an edgy rhythm, tight. wud be great to hear it read out loud. great write.

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Aden orie 04 May 2008

i like it its good, keep it up

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Mark Sebert

Mark Sebert

Newport News, Virginia
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