Monday, July 9, 2007

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As lengthening shadows across the vista reach,
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Irene C S ClarkHogg
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 16 October 2009

great poem.......................

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Ben Gieske 04 August 2009

This poem crackles with sounds. susurration heard along a lonely beach. With the word susurration I can hear the sounds of sandpaper scrapping as the shadows slowly creep along. I like all the s words in this first part.

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