Friday, July 13, 2007

Obligatory Moon Poem Involving A Train Comments

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you should see the moon
tonight.
It sits, a smile, perched
among stars and
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Ivan Donn Carswell 13 July 2007

We believe what we wish to believe until we make self-discoveries offering other possibilties. The symbolism of the train is your reality check - tracks being an assurance rather than a consequence. Apart from a specious title the poem is excellent. Rgds, Ivan

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