Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Oblation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Poetry? ! What do I know? ?
Someone unknown stirs the mind
Kneads the thoughts; knits fine rows
Of words and runs my numb hand
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Sathya Narayana
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Ency Bearis 24 February 2009

It's true..a writer sometimes feels..a nice conjoined words into verses...10

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Kesav Easwaran 12 February 2009

yes; He only writes...we are only His writing tools in this world...a poetic idea well conceived and well delivered 10

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Ridge Cahill 10 January 2009

The mind stirred indeed by yet someone unknown so as not to be recognized on paper. Poetic prose about poetry’s impetus. Well done.

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 December 2008

great write... giving tribute through a very beautiful poetry...to POETRY itself... giving POETRY its due...to also feel the love and feel those wonderful words it had shared with every poet's mind and heart...brilliant thoughts sir... (poetry comes from the commands of the heart to our mind to voice out what it feel through lovely, and wonderfuly written words...) 10+++++++

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Raj Nandy 18 December 2008

Very true! Poetry comes as a result of inspiration, at times sudden, and at other times remaining in the subconscious mind, -waiting to take shape & form in verse! -Raj Nandy

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Fay Slimm 16 December 2008

Good, well thought out poetry here Sathya - - love some of the runs of words, th the slight twists in presentation too read very well...... from Fay.

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Meena Iyer 16 December 2008

Indeed! poetry is not ours.. but of some inspired being that speaks through us!

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Min Sia 15 December 2008

Indeed..poetry..poems..unusual feelings arousing your thoughts..blinding your mind..but keeping track to what it speaks... Thanks for that numb hand..when words flow..it really feels good inside... Great concept! ..Really amazing write!

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Linda Ori 13 December 2008

'Someone unknown stirs the mind' - a wonderful way to describe poetic inspiration. Yes, for me they come unannounced and quickly form into verses. I just put the words together, but I wonder who creates those words? Whoever it is, I am thankful that it keeps coming! Linda :)

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Vaibhav Pandey 13 December 2008

It's exactly what I think. you cant plan it, It just happens.

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Zoleka Lusiti 12 December 2008

Me too...I am no poet, words just come through love of something or experience. This is good Sathya, best description. I love it! 10+++

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