Dazzling Sage Sun smiles opening face,
Tearing the tear of dew of last night,
Pouring the tear of love and emotion,
Sun declares that God is our creator,
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Sun nurtures life. Sun wakes up the sleeping world. Golden rays are sprinkled over all directions...
sir, you poem sounds positive, go on looking for Him Hope, you will find, ..... thanks for sharing the poem with us
Sun rise! ! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A lovely morning hymn, with amazing poetic art of Mahakul Ji.
Another beautiful morning has come singing glory to the great creator and the wold wakes up to another day's hectic activities....! A lovely write!
With every poem you amazes us, You are true master who write effortlessly on Nature and in particular morning times. Thanks for this wonderful poem.100++
Beauty of morning oblation has motivated a kind poetic mind. This poem contains many, many smiling golden rays. This is a happy-happy poem dear poet.
A superbly drafted poem with beauty and devotion! I love the way you narrate morning sun as Sage Sun. The poem is entirely devoted to God. A true spiritual man can sing a true hymn for God. I love such beautiful a poem.
A beautiful confluence of nature's aesthetic beauty and spirituality crafted in equally beautiful poem by the master craftsman.. Thanks for sharing. It definitely deserves fulll marks.
Morning; yes - its cheerful moment in lap of Earth and oblation performing through pure mind is a divine sense for every believer
An excellent nature and spiritual write. A great poem that brings out the love of God through the.beauty of nature. Indeed, we are blessed by His wonderful creations. Well crafted write with superb imagery.
We feel the grace of God in early morning when goden sunrays are sprinled over earth in all directions. A brilliant poem singing the glory of God, thanks for sharing.
All creation including sun glorifies god, love is superlative quality....wonderful poem, brilliant!
I love the picture you have shared and image you have drawn in words. Your poetic eyes have captured morning's scene beautifully. This oblation poem is lovely. Not less than 10! ! !
What a great poem you have written Kumarmani! My entire mind is filled with love and devotion after reading this lovely free verse poem.
I'll read this poem every morning as thw sun is rising.It makes the day better!