Monday, September 2, 2013

Obituary! Comments

Rating: 3.8

Last night
a heart died
some natural death again!
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Shahzia Batool
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Yasmin Khan 07 October 2013

A sad story in few words, brevity is soul of wit.

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Cassandra Jasmine 03 October 2013

Simple, yet holding a huge meaning. Beautiful!

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Danny Draper 09 September 2013

A succinct piece, a fitting farewell.

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Aswath Raman 07 September 2013

Anything you write falls into a beautiful poem! A very good few words ma'am!

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Passionate Reader 07 September 2013

short, symbolic and beautifully written! ! !

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 05 September 2013

A simple poem that asks so many questions on life.jk

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 September 2013

Beautiful poem on Obituary... If heart dies but keeping body just alive for name sake. or if Body dies but keeping heart alive in our lives...like Obituary. Great meaning indeed...Again a fantastic write.. Loved it.

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Dinesan Madathil 03 September 2013

A minute ago, I read this poem: An unusual reading indeed for once! -Remain in our thoughts ever-

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 03 September 2013

simple, so simple but hide the bigger meaning

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 03 September 2013

My heart felt congratulations!

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Sallam Yassin 02 September 2013

make your life full of heart's love as may you lose heart and life in a natural way or other

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 September 2013

Heart dying naturally after a purposful life is great. Let heart not die of a failure. My comment looks longer than your poem. Thank you.

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Unwritten Soul 02 September 2013

Condolences Another greeting Many from many hearts That still having life

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David Wood 02 September 2013

The heart suffers the loss of a loved one. Time is a great healer to mend a woundex heart

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