Obesity Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

Obesity

Rating: 4.0


He fat man grappled with obesity
Knew calamity of enormity
He failed diets
Didn't want to die yet
He would avoid sweat, its simplicity

Obesity

Obrien was obese
People looked at him and said "Gees! "
He stood up and said "My name is Obrien"
People saw a doughnut looking all brown.

Obesity

O-besity is bad news
B-ut people have different views
E-ating disorders is a culprit
S-itting about and eating not fit
I-t's a serious problem world wide
T-ake it on don't try to hide
Y-our future can be killed by obesity

Saturday, November 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: health
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 14 November 2020

Obesity is the root cause of diabetes, hypertension and Ischemic Heart Diseases. Thanks for drawing attention against this demon.

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Kostas Lagos 14 November 2020

Some peopl eat too much and others hane nothing to eat. Nice acrostic! 5/5

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