Obesity Comments

can someone help me with a literary device in this poem and state where it is applied

To much info..............................Dave

Very informative but.............entertaining too! What a combination! I will admit to doing every diet known to man....atkins/metabolife/exersize/small portions/ you name it......I've tried it! I finally have just decided I have to learn to be 'healthy' instead of worrying about being 'thin'. Your 'diet' plan sounds awfully good! Sincerely, Mary

Very good read Herbert....You know I still eat the good stuff :)

this really is good, Herbert. outstanding humour and rhyme, and you kept metre consistent throughout. well done! Jake