past door, past the window
across leaf, across the frond
by forest, by meadow
around the lake, around the pond
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Love the sprightly airy imaginative way this poem has about itself! It could be a living breathing dancing fairy because you wrote it into existence- -makes me want to search for it by the light of the moon and maybe find it in the twinkle of the stars. Excellent imagery and compelling atmosphere. A 10+++++++++++ of course.
If Only! ! I rate a 10