Monday, July 13, 2020

Obedient Till The End Comments

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J-ust be obedient till the end,
O-therwise the race is incomplete;
H-ours are running fast,
N-o time for surrender and retreat.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
july running surrender Birthday
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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2020

A brilliant acrostic poem my friend! Beautifully composed..................10

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 July 2020

Just be obedient till the end, Otherwise the race is incomplete; .....I think yes; exactly written

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
Bernard F. Asuncion
Bernard F. Asuncion
Subic, Philippines
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