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Many congratulations for this brilliant poem being featured as Poem of the Day!

smart expression……..congrats for being selected the poem as POD……deserves 10+

Everything was there in that uniform were all modesty, righteous sense, civilized behavior but what did happen ghostly accident by that hands behind all humane mood rough, clumsy, illiteracy on good manner though heard- " I can't breathe! " Oh! Ended that last step through grey fair eyesight everything happened suddenly, accidentally.... intentionally! -may not be, may no be

You could be under an oaf, yelling your second-last sentence: 'Get off o' me you oaf! ' ...........yeah; but ..............(Next Comment)

Poetry nowadays with language as you put it in your way Very well scripted with good concept....10++

CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your amazing poem as the member poem of the day. With surety, two lines more with surety a poetry carries. This poem is brilliant poem...10

I have commented on this before. Congratulations for having it chosen as poem of the day!

You could be under an oaf, yelling your second-last sentence: 'Get off o' me you oaf! ' wonderful short poem. terrible killing of Floyd. the world is still shivering and it happens in this century

Sure sign! ! ! With the muse of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I think this poem is simply prefect! Bravo!

Great work Douglas. Love your thinking.......

A well penned poem of the day. Simply exceptional. Congrats on your featured piece.....10++++

I like this, especially the line about your second-to-last sentence!

Excellent! Liked it dear poet! Thanks for sharing.....10+++