Monday, June 15, 2009

O’ You My Luminescent Lips Comments

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O’ YOU MY LUMINISCNT LIPS
esspeecee …15.06.09.

With your swinging lips
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Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty
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Jen Capaldi 28 October 2009

a wonderful poem. very creative and full of life, i love the trip around the world and even space with the irresistable lips of your love. has great flow in it's repetion and no shortage of adventure in your trips to the mystical gardens of babylon to the desserts of the sahra to the bottom of the ocean to the outer limits of space and everywhere in between. great write worthy of 10's all of the way! Jen

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Ency Bearis 25 October 2009

sweet lips with nectar alluring.....sweet write.....10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 October 2009

WoW! every stanza bloomed with diffrent beauty! 10+

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Joseph Poewhit 23 October 2009

A whole kaleidoscope of Kissee's

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Indira Babbellapati 22 October 2009

i'm amazed at the way you conceived this...

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Bursting with mouth watering beauty. Thanks for sharing.

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Mubeen Sadhika 19 October 2009

Lovely poem. With nice beautiful narration. thanks for sharing.10+++

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C. P. Sharma 19 October 2009

Dr. Chakravorty, The luscious lips whole universe kiss, In them your eyes see rainbow bliss. CP

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C. P. Sharma 19 October 2009

Dr. Chakravorty, The luscious lips whole universe kiss, In them your eyes see rainbow bliss. CP

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C. P. Sharma 19 October 2009

Dr. Chakravorty, The luscious lips whole universe kiss, In them your eyes see rainbow bliss. CP

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C. P. Sharma 19 October 2009

Dr. Chakravorty, The luscious lips whole universe kiss, In them your eyes see rainbow bliss. CP

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C. P. Sharma 19 October 2009

Dr. Chakravorty, The luscious lips whole universe kiss, In them your eyes see rainbow bliss. CP

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C. P. Sharma 19 October 2009

Dr. Chakravorty, The luscious lips whole universe kiss, In them your eyes see rainbow bliss. CP

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C. P. Sharma 19 October 2009

Dr. Chakravorty, The luscious lips whole universe kiss, In them your eyes see rainbow bliss. CP

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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009

nice metaphorical poem about lips, lovely to read..10++++++++++

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Catrina Heart 18 October 2009

wow such an esspeecee about lips...detailed and well presented...Loved it! 10++++

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Seema Chowdhury 17 October 2009

very nice and interesting poem. very creative too. thanks alot for sharing. take care. i have sent 4 new poems yesterday. on pg1,2,3 pl see and send your comments. 1. puzzle pieces start to take place 2. unwrap the present 3. an autumn crown 4. gentle wind of hope

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Seema Chowdhury 17 October 2009

very nice and interesting poem. very creative too. thanks alot for sharing. take care. i have sent 4 new poems yesterday. on pg1,2,3 pl see and send your comments. 1. puzzle pieces start to take place 2. unwrap the present 3. an autumn crown 4. gentle wind of hope

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Seema Chowdhury 17 October 2009

very nice and interesting poem. very creative too. thanks alot for sharing. take care. i have sent 4 new poems yesterday. on pg1,2,3 pl see and send your comments. 1. puzzle pieces start to take place 2. unwrap the present 3. an autumn crown 4. gentle wind of hope

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Seema Chowdhury 17 October 2009

very nice and interesting poem. very creative too. thanks alot for sharing. take care. i have sent 4 new poems yesterday. on pg1,2,3 pl see and send your comments. 1. puzzle pieces start to take place 2. unwrap the present 3. an autumn crown 4. gentle wind of hope

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