Sunday, September 9, 2012

O What Of Sorrow Comments

Rating: 4.9

O what of sorrow, I ask, what of sorrow
Stealing the heart as a thief in the night
Shall there be rapture, sweet joy for tomorrow
Will there be sunshine to honour my sight
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Valerie Dohren
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Ray Quesada 08 October 2012

few people have your ability! ! i'd love to hear what you have to say about some of my poems! ! i give this one a 10, and i consider myself to be a seasoned critic of poetry and literature. i rarely give people a 10. bravo! ! -RQ-

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Walterrean Salley 13 September 2012

Such a beautiful poem, although born of sadness. It goes straight to the heart. Thanks Val.

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Valsa George 11 September 2012

Such spells of sorrow and gloom are part of life; but I am sure, that star will definitely lead you out of the dark! Great poem! !

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Danny Draper 10 September 2012

An affirmation of hope and strength, joy and life celebrated with resilience.

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Meera Panigrahi 10 September 2012

No more to feel all the sorrow confounding Follow the star leading out of the dark Loved the ending. Full of hope and optimism

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Heather Wilson 10 September 2012

Such a heartfelt poem, I do hope you will be able to keep following that star that will lead you out of the dark. A lovely write.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 September 2012

really a beautiful poem and the feelings of a heart is well expressed!

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Robert Green 09 September 2012

Another excellent poem Val, great writing.

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Payal Parande 09 September 2012

a phenomenal poem mam....i am speechless thank you for sharing, love payal

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Dave Walker 09 September 2012

A very beautiful poem, really like it.

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Anita Sehgal 09 September 2012

Dear Valerie, Living my life then within its great teaching Happy and joyous, and free of remorse These two lines are indeed the crux of life.... very beautiful

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