Saturday, October 10, 2009

O, Waves! Comments

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O, waves! You run up an’ you rise
You thud upon the silent shores
Yearning you try to reach up high
The moon upon the distant sky
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2020

What a wonderful poem with superb imagery. The high and lows of life have been vividly and beautifully depicted in this marvelous poem. Excellently written.

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Eyan Desir 10 November 2009

Interesting piece well written

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 24 October 2009

beautiful poem, i am feeling an emotion of unfulfillment which is resonating through this poem.......! ! !

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Shamik Kumar Bose 23 October 2009

a lovely ringing poem.

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Antonio Liao 22 October 2009

you help my medicine to cure my pain..... i do love reading your poem.... like transcendental gallops of rest in the bodily stress... thanks you and God bless my dear friend... a salute and a star....a 10 +++

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 22 October 2009

A timely, reflective piece. Well written and pleasant to read

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 October 2009

A perfect piece of a poem with silent rhyming, the end is really touching. Simple choice of words and a great view.10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 20 October 2009

very nice symbols/figuratives!

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Catrina Heart 18 October 2009

An ode to the waves which symbolizes man and its behavior...well done...10++++++

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Stacey Watts 18 October 2009

Beautifully written. I loved the flow. Excellent the ocean theme.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 October 2009

Classical, tuneful and philosophical! Reminded the beautiful poetry of yesteryears

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premji premji 15 October 2009

i know just only one word: marvellous..........

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

a beautiful piece.... well penned..

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Patti Masterman 14 October 2009

This says so much and says it so colorfully. The idea of waves yearning is a new one and quite intriguing..(smile)

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Ankur Ankur 14 October 2009

very moving simple yet deep 10

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Raj Arumugam 14 October 2009

a marvelous mood poem, Kesav...

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 14 October 2009

wonderful imagery.... soft and simple poem. grief that is mutual.... loved it. thank you.

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Dr Kamran Haider 14 October 2009

Stretching out to my burdened heart You resonate mute with my pains… Wow amazing lines... Genuine imagery... Quite a feast for my eyes and craving mind... Thanks for sharing...

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Raj Nandy 14 October 2009

A RHYTHMIC AND A TOUCHING POEM, - LIKE THE WAVES ITSELF! 10! -RAJ

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Deepti Agarwal 13 October 2009

How nicely u have compared a state of heart n pain with the waves.. both r aspiring to reach the Moon.. n falls back in frustration....

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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