O, waves! You run up an’ you rise
You thud upon the silent shores
Yearning you try to reach up high
The moon upon the distant sky
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beautiful poem, i am feeling an emotion of unfulfillment which is resonating through this poem.......! ! !
you help my medicine to cure my pain..... i do love reading your poem.... like transcendental gallops of rest in the bodily stress... thanks you and God bless my dear friend... a salute and a star....a 10 +++
A timely, reflective piece. Well written and pleasant to read
A perfect piece of a poem with silent rhyming, the end is really touching. Simple choice of words and a great view.10
An ode to the waves which symbolizes man and its behavior...well done...10++++++
Beautifully written. I loved the flow. Excellent the ocean theme.
Classical, tuneful and philosophical! Reminded the beautiful poetry of yesteryears
This says so much and says it so colorfully. The idea of waves yearning is a new one and quite intriguing..(smile)
wonderful imagery.... soft and simple poem. grief that is mutual.... loved it. thank you.
Stretching out to my burdened heart You resonate mute with my pains… Wow amazing lines... Genuine imagery... Quite a feast for my eyes and craving mind... Thanks for sharing...
A RHYTHMIC AND A TOUCHING POEM, - LIKE THE WAVES ITSELF! 10! -RAJ
How nicely u have compared a state of heart n pain with the waves.. both r aspiring to reach the Moon.. n falls back in frustration....
What a wonderful poem with superb imagery. The high and lows of life have been vividly and beautifully depicted in this marvelous poem. Excellently written.