Saturday, October 12, 2019

O Thou Fantail Comments

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O thou Fantail

You might become ‘nother sparrow,
Each day getting harder to see,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Bharati Nayak 12 October 2019

A fine poem about the beautiful bird fantail - -Your love for the bird as well as your concern for their dwindling number have been nicely expressed in this poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 October 2019

Good to see your feedback after a while, and thanks for liking the poem, dear poet.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 October 2019

O music maker yon compare/Marvelling with your melody/You sing and fly with unique flair/That audible from afar be......delightful expression sir! An elegant piece of work......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 October 2019

'Elegant piece of work', thank you so much for such good words, dear Dr Swain. It is the good reading poets that go to make good poems.

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