O The Young Man Of My Age Comments

Yes Akram, you deserve honour! fine wording and thoughtful! 10+

Young, energetic but seems useless. Truely, if young men could arise, this earth could be a nice place to live in. Nice piece.

if you think young you are one. other alternative is go to Phunter. any way nice poem voted10 surya

i like a lot the theme u are discussing, very deep and has a positive message to the reader; besides ur way of writing is interestingly good...

being young it's a wonderful thing but we must use it right we must spend it in a right way but i think that we have 2 lose something either 2 spend this time in trivials 7 u will have no time 2 gain money or rise a family or 2 spend this time working hard & taking care of business. great poem.10+++

A nice invitation to ponder upon seriousness of life and fleeting time, well penned!