O, Son Of God! Comments

When dost thou come down? To rebuild a house of no hate wonderful prayer, very well written poem 10/10

a fitting appeal from a world so forgetful of kindness and love; caught in amassing more for oneself than the other person

that is a VERY nice poem and so touching and true. bravo

and you wrote a wonderful piece here! nice choice of words!

The poem starts with a beautiful premise, an ideal, then follows the real and the last two stanzsa a wish, ahd He may descend, a hope too. I liked the style of this writing Kesav.10

kesav sir...a very thoughtful poem...sometimes miracle do happen...let us hope it does...10

When dost thou come down? Once again amongst us To demolish this temple this body Where greed presides, You have touched upon the two evils plaguing mankind today.....greed and hate - If only this message could be spread far and wide - your prayer would be answered...Great writing.

A very powerful invocation/prayer. Let me join you Sir and let us all pray Him to come again.

These are very thoughtful lines, dear Kesav, inviting us for a reflection on today's man-made damage across the world. We hope your deep thoughts, and particular request can echo through Mankind. Thank you very much for your appealing request. Happy New Year! Warm regards, Maria

When dost thou come down? Once again amongst us To demolish this temple this body Where greed presides, Just as thou destroyed Thy body on cross Along with all our sins! A well-crafted piece with meaning laden in its lines...Winnie

Very great piece Sir... A bell to wake us up... He was destroyed but have risen again after three days... really a significant piece. 10++++ Maia

a very thought provoking poem, Kesav, and very timely too. you begin with despair, angst and frustration at what man has done to himself, and plead for resurrection. Tagore Wrote, as long as a child is born, it proves God is not yet disappointed in man. that was a long time ago, I wonder if its still relevant. i share your anguish and hope your prayers are answered. I sincerely join you in your prayers. Meery Xmas and a happy new year. Regards Mamta

when dost he come. we need him soon.. but only in his time.. :) good poem.

Beautiful and meaningful. Thanks for sharing.

A true description of the poor world of Today devoid of beliefs and ethical values...

A timely piece of work...I would dare say, you've marvelled here...beginning with confession to end with a request....simply superb...congrats Kesav and thanks for this lovely work

Deep, intense, passionate faith....indulges in the honey comb of Faith... a reflection that everybody should read....a poem who shouts in the wilderness of the desert.....thank you and God bless...a 10 +++++

Right poem in the correct time..Brings messages to the peoples who would like peace and sovereignty in the world..Happy xmas.

a wonderful christmas eve poem..the son of god is already here in you.and everyone of us...let's wake up to the truth..before we destroy our home

As always, your poems address greater truths and in this context, I would like to mention that your understanding of Christianity and its tenets is remarkable. A very reflective poem of how the Lord died for the deeds of others and resurrected later to show the world that love conquers all. Excellent rendition of the poem. Thanks, mandara