O Sky, My Blue Sky Comments

I enjoyed the rythum of this poem, the colour descriptives gave me great visials. A very uplifting sense when readiing your poem.

Good imagine and enchanting metaphor can make your poem alive! !

You sound really happy in this poem Nil, singing for joy - great write.

Love this, Nila. While reading, I sang along. A beautiful melody.

Wonderful poem. It is indeeda song using nature to appreciate the final abode. Thanks

So flap your wings and soar into the clear blue sky, scaling greater heights! !

An excellent poem so precious! One is taken along with mirth to ride over the clouds. I ENJOYED the poem. Thank you and best wishes.