Thursday, August 16, 2012

O Raging Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

O wind, O raging wind
Come seize me in your flight
Then bear me on your wings
Through realms of darkest night
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Valerie Dohren
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Smoky Hoss 23 August 2012

This speaks so powerfully toward life. Incredible, and beautiful.

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Constance K Yost 23 August 2012

To be carried above all things-what a great thought and you put it all so beautifully! Constance Yost

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Robert Wynn 19 August 2012

Valerie, Please post all you want on my God's Book blog page at betterthingsbegin.com and thx

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Robert Wynn 19 August 2012

Yes, what he said, a song of songs,

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Eric Cockrell 18 August 2012

we are born of the wind... and like the wind, have no home, or destination. love this one!

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Payal Parande 18 August 2012

so beautiful i am in awe mam every time i read you poem it is always feel like i am listing to a bewitching melody... and i think i am in love with this piece splendid and brilliant... thank you for sharing this amazing poem love, payal

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Joseph Anderson 18 August 2012

Your writings don't leave much room for improvement. The competition is thin where you reside. Very melodic-a beaut

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Betty Bolden 18 August 2012

this is very nice thank you.

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Captain Cur 17 August 2012

Tell em' Val. Phenomenal message in that poem. Human declaration of power against the unknown.

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Danny Draper 17 August 2012

A strong declaration and great reinforcing element by repetition.

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Savita Tyagi 17 August 2012

Beautiful poem. Behold that fierce wind to open the door of magic land! Enjoyed it so much.

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Neela Nath Das 17 August 2012

Val, so lovely wish! it's again a WOW poem from your pen!

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Heather Wilson 16 August 2012

A really lovely write Val, a beautiful poem, much enjoyed.

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Dave Walker 16 August 2012

I've said this before about your poems, so I'll say it again, I think this is one of your best, it leaves the reader wanting more, it's poetry at its very best, and it's an honour to read it. A truly fantastic poem.

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