O wind, O raging wind
Come seize me in your flight
Then bear me on your wings
Through realms of darkest night
...
Read full text
To be carried above all things-what a great thought and you put it all so beautifully! Constance Yost
Valerie, Please post all you want on my God's Book blog page at betterthingsbegin.com and thx
we are born of the wind... and like the wind, have no home, or destination. love this one!
so beautiful i am in awe mam every time i read you poem it is always feel like i am listing to a bewitching melody... and i think i am in love with this piece splendid and brilliant... thank you for sharing this amazing poem love, payal
Your writings don't leave much room for improvement. The competition is thin where you reside. Very melodic-a beaut
Tell em' Val. Phenomenal message in that poem. Human declaration of power against the unknown.
A strong declaration and great reinforcing element by repetition.
Beautiful poem. Behold that fierce wind to open the door of magic land! Enjoyed it so much.
I've said this before about your poems, so I'll say it again, I think this is one of your best, it leaves the reader wanting more, it's poetry at its very best, and it's an honour to read it. A truly fantastic poem.
This speaks so powerfully toward life. Incredible, and beautiful.