~ O' Poetry I Read I Write ~ Comments

because you were the poets then you must read and write the poetry was part of the life of a poet. Good write 10/10

this one i can relate to! good write

O' Poetry ~ Life I buy Never sell bye bye 'NEVER sell bye bye'....I feel pain. Why, is it cry! How do you think of selling such commodity! 'bye bye'....a commodity to sell! Dumb! Perhaps it is our modernity or post-modernity when our thoughts have been so crooked by witnessing the reality in the social ground of deceiving, depriving by the name of love, humanity and the impulses which only man can share to its own race and with other animals also. Other animal can't think of it, Shit! I think you have written the line as I quoted. If there is any punctuating marks, I can't see. Such as..Life I buy / Never sell / bye bye. Perhaps it is not. So very much painful feeling spreads through my nerves. Good poem with confessions which creats, I don't know, very sad feelings. Did you want it! Actually poet also sometimes don't know what he wanted to creat. It is the blessing of art. Otherwise no difference would be there with mathematics. READ AND WRITE AND LIVE LONG.....LONG...... Regards 10+++ Apoet

O' Poetry ~ Read n’ write To share Dare n’ bare, Don’t care Love to dye By Hi and fie. hmmm sweet write, it seems that you are a professional poet and willing to be poet..thats good.. at least someone is hundred percent poet with rich ideas..10/10

‘O' Poetry ~/Life I buy/Never sell bye bye…’ Yeah poets live in life live with life like within life …all are within Poetry A joy ride to read Ms. Nivedita’s poetries. To share/Dare n’ bare, /Don’t care /Love to dye/By /Hi and fie. Sure Poets only hypothecation is to poetry stay transparent [bare] yeah hue readers [dye] and greets all by Hi and bold enough to phew ‘fie’ except poetry … 10++ Dr. V.

Niv, I share your love for poetry, I read, read, and read and write, write and write...and sing poetry. I write poem while listening to music. Such a cute writing proclaiming love of poetry. A 10+++

Really like the way is written. Blesses

‘…Love to dye/By /Hi and fie…’ Here poet loves both to Hi and fie…and encolres [dye] both …as both and needed and acknowledged Next ‘…Life I buy/Never sell bye bye…’ Sure…why bye bye? 10++

O' Poetry ~ Life I buy Never sell bye bye All I’ll do until I die Lo! I’m no hi-fi.... o poetry...meet u at malls with wi-fi.....

I read it loudly! good rhyme! :)

O' Poetry ~ Read n’ write To share Dare n’ bare, Don’t care Love to dye By Hi and fie. ' Thats interesting write. I really enjoyed reading it Well done madam 10+

‘…O' Poetry ~ // Life I buy // Never sell bye bye...’ Surely poets are incurably unputdownably hardcore optimistic… Nice poetic spirit… 10++ dr.sakti

Utter Humility…some time Poet’s subsubtly…airs Pomp like as if Cliff …she claims she is not ‘Lo! I’m no hi-fi.’ Thanks for sharing… 10++

Thanks for your comments Niv, O' Niv, your poetry is ever so pleasing to my ears, It's obvious that your rhymes spur your imagination and is a delight to my ears! A lovely poem and a 10+++

Another NIV classic written for our delectation and disection - yet she protests she does not know why she writes - methinks she does protest too much. We all love you NIV - thanks for this - another TEN. V 1&2 Poetry must be written and having been written must be read. The power of a particular poem may not be realised until the poet is long dead - but write we must. V 3 gives us some reasons to write TO SHARE (our ups and downs) TO DARE (others to read and accept or reject) TO BARE (our hearts and emotions) . DON'T CARE (poets can be iconoclasts) LOVE TO DYE - Poetry has the licence to paint situations in very inapropriate shades and colours. V 4 Poetry should never be commercial - it is at the heart of satire and protest - It is also more effective if written in LO - KEY rather than HI - FI. NIV - We will all write poetry until we DIE - but we will never be in your class - you are amazing. Love you lots in Poetry - JOHN X X X

'O' Poetry ~ Read n’ write To share Dare n’ bare, Don’t care Love to dye By Hi and fie. . O' Poetry ~ Life I buy Never sell bye bye All I’ll do until I die Lo! I’m no hi-fi. ' Could not stop laughing with the last line 'I am no hi-fi'. With all the dare n' bare who could think you to be otherwise. Lol At least I can thank God I understood this poem of yours.

I like a fast flowing quick and to the point rhyme, well done Ian

Poetry is something that come out from the heart. You are on the road to success step by step. Keep it up till you succeed at last.

‘…Love to dye // By // Hi and fie…’ Bold n’ Spirited comment… To a poet such attitude is daring…full of faithfulness to one’s emotion… Ten++ AB London

that's fast! i liked it........10