O' Pleasant Twilight Evening! Comments

A beautiful translation in such a simply woven poem!

Some evenings are painted with such beauty, I wish it to stay forever. But all the elemental details begin to fade and before you know it, such lovely scene is forever gone. A wonderful and indepth poem. Good work.

In twilight's hazy lustre, everything looks beautiful and pleasant, but it is also a reminder of impending darkness! Enjoyed the poem!

Thanks for your reading and nice comment.

on the threshold of light and darkness....like a deserted woman. Beautiful metaphor.