O, The New Year Dawn!
The innocent infant you!
I find your golden tender arms come floating
In search of my window sill
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Wash away the stains! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This is the new dawn, heartfelt and a real experience. May it be so for every one Kesav. Good flow all over.10
As we awake the dawn of 2010 may everything be crystal clear to both our eyes Kesav. Happy New Year regards Bob
Vintage K.V.E., indeed. Structue-Smooth, and always a pleasure to visit & comment! F j R 2010
It's ever so hard to predict and anticipate that what emerges from womb of time and yet one can always welcome the dawning new year with open arms and millions of best wishes. A beautiful and hope invoking write in the midst of gloom and fearful state of mind, thanks Kesav!
Kesav ji, thanks for this inspiring poem for the New Year 2010! -Raj
'Erase the gloom That lingers over my mind! Wash away the stains! Make the lonely corners alive! ' Memorable lines Kesav...a refreshing poem. Thanks
‘Aloker Ei Jharnadhara y dhuya Dao…’- RNT ‘Flush out all dirts by the fountain shower of Light wipe out all blues of mind…’- RNT Excellent Sir…Vedantic thought on Sun God well poemed and by all heart...score you in zillion… Ms. Nivedita UK
the personification of the dawn made the poem sweet and wonderful i want to read it again! ...that's sensational keep writing!
Beautiful new dawn....so refreshing a new day...a new life wonderful picture of a new dawn.....of its young golden light that tenderly shine and touch everything really lovely... 10+++++ Lovelots, Maia
Beautiful and remarkable praises of a new dawn, Kesav...10.. Happy new year to you too Tsira
The metaphorical value of this poem written from deep within you is as innocent as its expression and it takes one along the path of light and knowledge and new beginnings just as it sweeps away the darkness in the corners and in the mind. 'That crept in without 'your' words' seems more appropriate, if you too agree. To erase and wash away the negativity is most welcome. In all, a much appreciated piece of poetry and very deep in its intricacy. Indepth study of your genius awaits me! arya, with thanks for sharing.
wonderfully written.. good change of the sheets.
Erase the gloom That lingers over my mind! ............. beautiful lines..I love this..
Wash away the stains! Make the lonely corners alive! A new dawn is cherished; the smily frown is banished!
Heart-felt wish for the new ringing in...and that is the wish of everyone too...thank you Kesav for your nice greeting...wish you too for a prosperous and peaceful life..sorry I couldn't respond immediately...house is full of guests...thanks again
darkness sleeping...and brightness awake to welcome the innocent 2010...what a lovely poem sir...you have personified the new year so well....WISHING YOU ALL HAPPINESS IN 2010
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