Monday, October 14, 2019

O My Soul! Lost Are Thy Footsteps! Comments

Rating: 5.0

O my soul! Where is thy gentle healing touch
That caressed me.
Why do I feel so dry?
Like a dry log that has been put on life's pyre
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Savita Tyagi
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Susan Williams 30 October 2019

Very very very compelling write, Savita! - - -> Why do I feel so dry? Like a dry log that has been put on life's pyre To burn and burn...< - - - - - - - that is awesome in its power! 10+++++++++ and onto my fav list

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2019

Stripped of your light Moon and stars plunge in darkness. All went astray but a dull aching memory. It carries on… Receding in Chaos..... O my soul! Will you hold on to it? .......impressive expression with outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 October 2019

too much of soul try to avoid whole sole live life as you would be happy you should

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 October 2019

O Soul, O my soul you are the bird yeah, the unusual bird comes and goes frequently yet unseen, unknown o the unstable heart still you are in lack of knowledge still your cage of the bird in delusion the mirage, the infatuation wraps you fancifully thats why the bird still comes and goes frequently though unseen-unknown absolutely......///

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