I admit,
You did all chores,
cooked me food
and washed me clothes
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you have a good rhyme dear. you express things clearly and simply. great job keep writing =]
You have politely expressed your hard feelings. This will be cathartic, no doubt. You have good expression, so keep writing.
ma'am my confidence increases when you like my composition.Thank you Ma'am Shahzia.
writing is a channel for catharsis...the composition shows the talent!
A well expressed train of thoughts nicely penned from the heart. It baffles me whenever I see some mothers abuse their children. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.