Wednesday, February 11, 2009

O' My Love Comments

Rating: 4.7

Wall of haste, wall of shadows
Who's my life? Iam living for

Who's my present? who's my future?
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Kesav Easwaran 28 December 2019

Hope you have found him by now. Hope expectations positivity. Nice write

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Sumaira. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Rachel Butler 13 October 2009

Lovely tone with sweetish flow Rachel Ann Butler

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Indira Babbellapati 24 March 2009

hope u found one! hey, there's some urgent beat to the verses, i say!

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Catrina Heart 18 March 2009

the prince charming is wanted for the heart of the author, , , , , , lovely 10

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Akram Saqib 14 March 2009

ideals might be met but by luck, good expression of your ideal anyhow saqib

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Fay Slimm 14 February 2009

Written with appeal and honesty - a tender love poem - - 10 from Fay.

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Akram Awadat 13 February 2009

ya sum. very very nice word, beautiful poem i like it, well done

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Varun Batra 13 February 2009

Description of man matches me Well nice poem thanks for sharing

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Joseph Poewhit 13 February 2009

Dreams and prayers, do come true.

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Tom Golding 12 February 2009

What every young woman wishes for. Expressed poeticly. Tom

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Joseph Poewhit 12 February 2009

Like every female looking for a male

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XOR 9 11 February 2009

Nice..simple and clean! well thought...sends a positive message... keep writing

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Kesav Easwaran 11 February 2009

good poem on love and hopes...shows the sweet inside of a longing expecting heart...10

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Catrina Heart 11 February 2009

A very beautiful poetic prayer longing for someone true love...crafted with fine repeatition of words like wall of, who's my....10+++

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