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Innocent beauty! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Soul Must Take Flight Soar With Albatross poems infused with imagery from nature flight free flowing image which rings in heart the albatrosses is mind image nesting on my native shores on windy heights near island inlet sea or flying far out to sea over wave current ocean huge span wings outstretched gliding flying across the oceans the world is sea wind road distant journeys soul must take flight soar with albatross Dedicated to the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE.

This is full of passionate longing.....! It flows like a winding river with occasional churns and swirls. The ardent lover in you lets the dreamy thoughts flow in spontaneous ease. Lovely poem!

Our souls there will be as the romantic clouds to fly with the flying albatrosses, to touch the unshaped sky body, to absorb our eternal ethereal feelings within the souls...... A very romantic poem full of the flavor of love and the joy of blissful togetherness!

a poem infused with imagery from nature, for me the image which rings near home is 'Our souls there will be as the romantic clouds to fly with the flying albatrosses, ' For me the albatrosses is mind image nesting on my native shores, on windy heights near the sea, or flying far out to sea over wave current ocean, huge wings outstretched gliding flying across the oceans of the world.

Superb Lovely lines from the heart......

A marvelous poem that expresses in beautiful detail the great feelings for a loved one. It captures the wonders that love brings. Lovingly penned with full of emotions.

Heartfelt and touchy poetry. Very well incorporated. Nicely woven and perfectly articulated with eminent pauses so the reader can dwell in the feeling and feel the essence of the poet. Admirations for one of your best creativity.