Tuesday, November 19, 2013

O My Life Please Tell Me Comments

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Nothing is wrong, atleast you left me alone
Clumsy and stupid heart is broken by my own
O fairies! Calm breeze, you love me not, deviate
My deep breath, you left me, like a fish on sand,
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Aftab Alam
broken fish
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 November 2013

My deep breath you left me like fish on sand The end stated beautifully. Nice poem.

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