Saturday, September 19, 2020

O My Jazmin Comments

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O My Jazmin-

I know, your pair of lips speaks of me
Your electrifying touch of hands solicits me
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2020

Lips of love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Varsha M 19 September 2020

Very well captured every eternal message one would seek. Pouring out like a river touching every nook and corner reminding the very presence of special one the fill every space around. Beautifully penned. Great admirations.

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M Asim Nehal 19 September 2020

A poem with true feelings of love, Though beauty disguised initially The pure love overtook the fancy An articulate poem with free flow Of words expressing what poet felt/// 5*

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