O' My Innocent Heart Comments

Write comment. " O my innocent heart, Such a beatiful start." Read my poem, Love and Iust, dear Shameem. Thanks

O' weeping heart no one there but you and me I expected faith from those Who do not even know what faith is nice lines.. i really like it.. so ful of emotions and loneliness

I think the poem is well written and nice.you have alot of feelings that are expressed in your writting. Keep writting

Very touching and heartfelt write. Good descriptions describing the troubles of the heart. You touched mine with your poem. Enjoyed.

Flowing words from your deep heart. Like

Nice. There are many sympathetic people in every corner It seem everyone become actor in my street.... But everyone is not same. Its very much heart touching poem as well as beautiful.

know its you heart not a brick or stone USE an apostrophe for it's/it is. - - - - - - - - - - - - nice poem. thanks for sharing. bri :) - - unfortunately, for some people....O heart be emotionless Otherwise you will be shattered by this world, .... may be good advice! i am not without emotion but i am a little bit; cold-hearted. it helps; when faced with adversity sometimes. my favorite line: I know its you heart not a brick or stone

A fabulous poem of love.........

The poem has very flowing movement. Like a calm old river. The poem seems to show an acceptance. As if something had been forgotten and suddenly revived. It is something knowing. A tranquility of life with the of understanding. Bien!

Great work. I love how you flowed the words together and how you described that the heart should remain emotionless to not be shattered. Fantastic.

And if not by a word then by what? Though this by my face you can see, words as thought. Thought not a word, words not a thought, more than words by my thoughts you can feel....iip

Our heart can be heartless with us unless we rein in our expectations and emotions. A rhythmic poem with a beautiful heart!

O heart be emotionless, Otherwise you will be shattered by this world....I love this line! ! ! ! You're a great poet, I enjoyed reading your poems and thank you for reading mines: -)

I enjoyed this poem. I liked that you called it Innocent heart.

Sounds reality......a demerits thats prevailing these days....everyone is wearing a mask....like the words: I expected faith from those Who do not even know what faith is

HELLO HEART! ! ! ! Time to wake up, , , , , love is for good not fro cry......

wooow....what a poem...i also believe that there are many people who can make our heart shatter all over and by his belief, i have also written WORDS BEYOND BOUNDRIES so emphatic poem...keep writing always.....thanks...

It's a very understanding poem, a lot of people have been there. I like it. Nice work. :)

Beautiful. :) Thank you for sharing.

A heartfelt poem. Nice write. Thanks for sharing