Tuesday, February 9, 2021

O My Captain! Comments

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O my Captain, give me a chance
I will make you my focal point
and allow you to rule my life.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Brian Jani 10 February 2021

Yes Captaun, read my poem

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Captain Cur 09 February 2021

Brilliant write! Enjoyed reading very much, written with great style!

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me poet yeps poet 09 February 2021

you don't need captains you already are one MAN

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2021

A well crafted thought provoking poem. Very interesting closure lines to ponder about.

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Kostas Lagos 09 February 2021

Excellent poem! A really wonderful piece of poetry

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David Wood 09 February 2021

Our minds control our lives, for better or worse.

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M. Asim Nehal

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