Monday, February 22, 2016

O' Moon Tell Me.... Comments

Rating: 4.9

O' Full moon tell me
The secret of your growing and shortening
And appearing at night time?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rakesh Shah 20 July 2020

Nice conversation with moon. Nature delights.

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2018

THANKS TO ONE AND ALL FOR INVALUABLE COMMENTS.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2016

Trying to understand nature. Nice piece of work.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 February 2016

Its beautiful how you have found a connection between moon and love. Moon has a beauty n mystery that only love can match. Loved it.

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 February 2016

Wonderfully though man, Great write again.

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T Rajan Evol 27 February 2016

O Moon let all of us enjoy the poem by Asim.....Lovely poem on love, Thanks for sharing....10

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Abhilasha Bhatt 24 February 2016

This poem makes the moon an inspiration to live a happy life with just love....Amazing poem....loved it....thank you for sharing sir :)

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Abderrahmane Dakir 23 February 2016

Well poem about love. The level of love creases and decreases to live in a eternal change. Thank you for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 February 2016

Superb logic. It may impress even the moon. Thanks for sharing.10 +

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Shreya Hacks 23 February 2016

Never thought such about moon and its morphing, Liked it.

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Akhtar Jawad 23 February 2016

A nice philosophy of love and life; life also has phases like a moon. A beautiful poem.

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 February 2016

Beautiful philosophy of life.... You made it so simple with this beautiful poem Asim... grow when my lover is happy with me And I become weak and start shrinking When my lover is upset and this happens Quite frequently and it increases our love And the urge to meet again increases respect. This said it all..... perfect 10++++

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Valsa George 23 February 2016

A lovely reasoning behind moon's waxing and waning! Enjoyed the poem!

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Kelly Kurt 22 February 2016

A lovely anthropomorphizing.

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