Thursday, June 13, 2013
O Moon, My Love Comments
Rating: ★4.5
I know a lovely moon, sparkles as the eyes,
When I looked at her first, the sky was clearly blue,
It was the day after our rivers were filled with muddy water,
The termites had grown the wings to look for the dead hearts,
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Yasmin Khan
14 June 2013
A long write with a message and it makes very effective use of metaphors and images.
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8/5/2025 7:21:27 PM # 1.0.0
The great didactic, metaphorical write is very captivating!