O Moon! Poem by Prabir Gayen

O Moon!

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O Moon!

In deep darkness You shine O Moon!
You are dark moon very dark,
The light that makes you luminous,
Among stars makes you apart,
Is not to shine my world,
My darkness is deep and pure,
I am a dark deluge in my sky,
No stars no luminous bodies,
Only my Being with fleeting thoughts,
Your shiny delight does seem false,
Looking at your face I am effaced.
My darkness will die the day
I will go beyond my dark doorsill.
My Sun is hidden inside my room,
One Day I willillumine you with my rays,
O moon you are not away from me,
Nor I am far from you,
We both are one and the same,
The Sun of light and knowledge is our soul.
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O Moon!
Thursday, February 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sreelakshmi Revikumar 15 February 2019

Is the moon compared to a woman? ? I felt longingness in the poem. The sun and the moon shows two extends of the world.

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

If you think lover? Woman? Girl? Or your part...it is your wish...space is there to ponder over...thanks dear poet

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Saravanan Sivasubramanian 15 February 2019

very nice poem my wishes

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

Thanks dear poet......live....

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Jankovic Zoran 17 February 2019

...O moon you are not away from me, Nor I am far from you... The poem reminded me of the poem P. B. Sheley " Moon" , not in letters but in your feelings. Good song.

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Naila Rais 15 February 2019

Great......... Be the one who reflects by good deeds..... Naila

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2019

Moon! ! ! Muse! Night; light of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Michael Crowder 15 February 2019

I too love looking at the moon, your poem reveals its serenity. Thanks for publishing 🌜

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

Thanks dear poet.....very grateful

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 February 2019

An amazing allegory, Prabir...10++++

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