My world is changed, O magnificent night!
Boundless and wondrous as the sea is strong
surmounting day extinguishing all light,
dark eyed mysterious beauty, carbon
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Wow so beautifully and powerfully moving! .. A very deeply moving portrait! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++
A powerful and spellbinding write. The mystery and beauty of the night have been vividly portrayed and conveyed. Superb imagery.10++++
Due to magnificent night perception of life is changed. Mysterious beauty is well perceived through wonderful vision. Universe is very well felt. An interesting poem is excellently penned...10
A fabulous description of the charming night. Excellent write! Thanks for sharing….10+
Sort of sneered at it after a quick read and then tried it again and got a different impression .. quite effective. frightening as well.. recommend everyone read it at least twice thank you
Aye Wes! An honest comment! I often sneer at my own poems more often that I would like to admit. Thank you good sir!
If I keep reading your poems I'll quit being a priest and become a cutthroat pirate! 11!
There is always room for one more swashbuckler on the Malevolent. We actually could use a devout priest with a sense of humor. Not to dissuade you but I'm not actually sure what happened to the last one. I think Pirate Girl got him stowed away somewhere. She probably thinks he is insurance for when her time comes. Who knows! It's a big ship!
Thank you Bernard, may I bestow as many pluses on your work as you did on mine.
Magnificent night brings magical strong sea which is wondrous in front of mind. The world is changed with mysterious darkness but still we find beauty in perception because light dances inside night when we see stars in sky. We wait for the light of the day. This is an outstanding poem rich with imagery...10
Kumarmani, Without the light of stars we would forever be trapped in darkness. Thank you for your thoughtful comment.
A most beautiful painting of the Night. With all its dark beauty and might. Like a dark brave stallion, full of strength and mystery, provoking in the reader great delight. A majestic poem! And truly magnificent piece.
A splendid ode to night, with its all-encompassing mystery, brilliant in its praise of darkness!