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I never melted alone in love, mountains melted with me, I never fell alone in love, falls slowly descended with me, I never slipped in love alone, rivers slipped with me, - - - - The intensity of the lover's feeling in loneliness so poetically expressed.

Beautifully expressed, Akhtar Sahab, the frozen feeling of loneliness through mountains, rivers and water falls. Even amidst the bountiful nature, how lonely can you feel. Wonderful imagery........10

Melting in love means a lot with beauty of hope and joy. A great perceptional poem you have shared and I am glad to revisit. I give you full 10 marks as usual I give you always...10

What a wonderful imaginary! I cite... I didn't lost my identity alone in love, a river lost her identity with me, Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Such a lovely poem... :)

To be frozen in the loneliness of the mountain..amazing

What a wonderful poem on behalf of a lover who finds justifiable reasons for his fall, Loved it Janab,11+++ and welcome back to the LOVE topic.

Lovely poem. Nature of love demands of the love of nature. The idea has nicely been expressed. Even the loneliness will come as an advantage. Thanks for sharing.