Thursday, February 14, 2019

O' Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I felt you coming
In the hissing of mango leaves
In the enchanting fragrances of spring breeze
In the melancholy cuckoo's song and
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Bharati Nayak
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Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2022

More ((Beautiful)) than i can say! .. Beyond # S! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2022

Such a deep connection that touches the heart and the soul! ..

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Sandra Feldman 21 October 2021

This poem is absolutely beautiful and indescribably unique as it describes the feelings that love provokes so perfectly. A most moving and unforgettable work of art

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 October 2021

I saw you everywhere......I feel you deep within When the sky is overcast with clouds When gloom and miseries shroud When agonies oppress the heart Indifference and callousness choke me to death......absolutely brilliant. Loved the poetic expression!

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 March 2019

Lines so fragrant with emotions, an apt poem for The Day.

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2019

While revisiting this poem I found your lovely comment to my delight.Thank you Sir for such high opinion about the poem.

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Prabir Gayen 04 March 2019

There are times when I cry I see you also crying I wipe my tears As if it is yours I feel your touch Agony and anguish Vanish from heart. ......superb poetic lines

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2019

Thank you Prabir Gayen for your kind read and appreciation.

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Prabir Gayen 04 March 2019

I hear your footsteps As if to whisper in my ear And sing the song of life Asking me not to despair... Very beautiful poem on Love

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M Asim Nehal 28 February 2019

Wow so well written, great imageries, nice flow and articulate writing. The expression of love is magical.10+++

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Bharati Nayak 28 February 2019

Thank you Mohammed Asim Nehal for your appreciation.

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Valsa George 27 February 2019

Love is a soothing balm..... bandaging all our inner bruises. The feeling that there is a loved one around to share our joy and sorrow is so edifying! Enjoyed this passionate and spontaneous expression of love! A 10

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Bharati Nayak 27 February 2019

Thank you Madam for visiting my poem.Your comments are always appreciated.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 February 2019

Lord has left many footsteps in nature. We see clouds and trees and many more beauty contexts. God has made many protective walls around us. He showers his mercy and he purifies us with his love. God gives us his greatest beam of light of wisdom. God removes all pain. This poem is of greatest love and devotion. This is an excellent poem very beautifully penned...10

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Bharati Nayak 27 February 2019

Thank you, Sir, for your kind comment.Yes, we can feel Lord in innumerable things of nature and He acts as a protective wall around us.

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Well devoted for love, thank u.

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 February 2019

A very emotional write. when love is lost heart weeps with grief. Each stanza is a gem. " There are times when I cry I see you also crying I wipe my tears As if it is yours I feel your touch Agony and anguish Vanish from heart.'...is so beautiful. Thanks for posting.10++++

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C F 20 February 2019

Your poem speaks for a person whose soul is soaked in love - You. Very well written

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 February 2019

In the hissing of nango leaves! ! I feel you deep within. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Glen Kappy 18 February 2019

dear bharati, i find this lovely—and true. there is no higher calling, and there can be no disappointment—not ultimately—when we are disciples or devotees of love. love continue to fill, surround, and guide you, sister-poet. -glen

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 February 2019

this is so beautiful and devoted I am sure your Valentine did and will always love it ma'am you have missed many of my good poetry do find time to scan if you may and if you can

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Sekharan Pookkat 15 February 2019

One day for love one day for life one day for mother one day for mother one day for women All other days for self! we converged into days! Oh! God, pore your mercy

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Bharati Nayak 15 February 2019

Thank you so muck for kindly reading my poem and your valuable comment.

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